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"Hello"
Veröffentlicht am 05. Juli 2009, 6 Seiten
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Wie die Zeit doch vergeht... Ich bin nun schon eine Weile in Deutschland und habe mich eingelebt. Trotz allem musste ich auch hier schon schlechte Erfahrungen sammeln. Dadurch stehe ich Menschen distanziert gegenüber und lasse nur die Wenigsten nah an mich heran. Müsst ihr mehr wissen? Dann fragt mich einfach! Ihr werdet dazu ja einen Weg finden und sicherlich kreativ genug sein, oder? ;) Greetz, Vivi
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My first text here

I'm just a simple girl
feeling the strangeness of this world
And so I search my way
which is changing day by day

Hello
Is there anybody out
Anyone who is understanding me
Hello
Is it also for you loud
Do you understand the sense of this plea

I am not wearing black
because of the reason that I am sad
It's just a symbol sign
For showing you that not all is fine
In this colourfull world
nobody shows the pain that hurts
To be different like you
this is the reason why I do

Hello
Is there anybody out
Anyone who is understanding me
Hello
Do I have to shout
Do you understand the sense of this plea

I am like a black rose
thornless but like an overdose
An overdose of fear
This place is so full of it right here
Don't want to go alone
in this world with hearts made of stone
Inside me is much more
A disturbed person that you could adore

Hello
Is there anybody out
Anyone who is understanding me
Hello
Please take my proud
and see the person that I use to be
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BlackMinded
Wie die Zeit doch vergeht...
Ich bin nun schon eine Weile in Deutschland und habe mich eingelebt. Trotz allem musste ich auch hier schon schlechte Erfahrungen sammeln. Dadurch stehe ich Menschen distanziert gegenüber und lasse nur die Wenigsten nah an mich heran.

Müsst ihr mehr wissen? Dann fragt mich einfach! Ihr werdet dazu ja einen Weg finden und sicherlich kreativ genug sein, oder? ;)

Greetz,
Vivi

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BlackMinded Re: Hello! -
Zitat: (Original von sastone am 07.07.2009 - 10:20 Uhr) First I thought of this one song "Hello" by I don't know his name... then I thought of another song "Hello" by Evanescence... But yours is pretty different to them both :)

Indeed it is a good song and I'd like to know the melody, too... or even if you'd imagine to make it more calm, or let it more rock...


I guess it would have a soft rock touch.
Evanescence is a good example. Kinda their style.
The Refrain, so the "Hello" Parts, would sound more rock like. More aggressive. :)

Melody would be like "Bring me to life".
Hope my other textes will be better. ;)
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BlackMinded Re: Hi Valentina - Maybe I will try out.
But German is hard to learn.
Thank you for reading.

Greetings
Valentina
Zitat: (Original von Boris am 06.07.2009 - 11:50 Uhr) its a good start.
Try it in german, it is not so havy!

Greetings Boris Prisewitsch, Mladschi sergant
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Boris Hi Valentina - its a good start.
Try it in german, it is not so havy!

Greetings Boris Prisewitsch, Mladschi sergant
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BlackMinded Re: Hello - As I told you before, it is no problem that your english isn't perfect. Mine isn't ether. But I understand what you will say, so it is really no problem. :)

Thanks for the compliments.
I will try my best.

Greetings to you
Valentina

Zitat: (Original von ObiRide am 05.07.2009 - 23:25 Uhr) Oh lord my english is so bad.
I don't know how I say what I think so I even say it's great.
I like your Songtext realy and hope your next will be so good like this.
Greets
Tobi
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BlackMinded Re: Good evening my dear - *flipping around*
Oh that makes me mad.
I hate it to make a failure in public.
Yes, it must be "pride", you are right.
So, I have to change it a little bit if this is somehow possible.

Silent dreams to you Milady! :)
Vivi
Zitat: (Original von LadyLy am 05.07.2009 - 20:47 Uhr) I was really curious how your first text here might be and now I'm exalted. I enjoyed reading the text and wish I could hear the melody you were thinking of. The one part I like best is the last refrain - But I guess there is a little mistake. It should be said "Please take my pride"

Anything else is just the way I think of myself sometimes. A girl to adore - Like the part about the overdose either.

Wish you a good night soon.
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LadyLy Good evening my dear - I was really curious how your first text here might be and now I'm exalted. I enjoyed reading the text and wish I could hear the melody you were thinking of. The one part I like best is the last refrain - But I guess there is a little mistake. It should be said "Please take my pride"

Anything else is just the way I think of myself sometimes. A girl to adore - Like the part about the overdose either.

Wish you a good night soon.
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